How to write about a phenomenon.

 


 

                   Public opinion polls show that ……………….. has become more discussed in our society because of several factors to the point that it is beginning to contribute a real threat especially to young people.

 

                According to me, I confess that there are many arguments that could support my thesis, I can cite among them. First, I have a real belief that …………..Second, ……. ……….Finally .

 

                To conclude, I personally see, relying on the above arguments, that it is time to change the way we think about for………………

 


For example :


                    Public opinion polls show that violence in school has become more discussed in our society because of several factors to the point that it is beginning to contribute a real threat especially to young people.

 

                According to me, I confess that there are many arguments that could support my thesis, I can cite among them. First, I have a real belief that one of the abvious reasons is that there is no real communication between students and their teachers. When there is a problem between a student and a teacher, they don’t sit down and dicuss it to find a solution. Second, students usually don’t like to be reprimanded in front of their classmates and reply violently or even attack the teacher Finally, some students and teachers have problems at home and this affects negatively their behavior at school and some teachers are not fair and treat students whit double standars which push to react violently to this kind of discrimination.

 

                To conclude, I personally see, relying on the above arguments, that it is time to change the way we think about for eradicate this phenomenon.